VSL Take Review · The Hook

Section 1 (0:36–5:05) · 25 groups · proof of the review tool. Tap ▶ to hear a take. Tap a take to mark it the keeper (green). My best guess is pre-picked. Setup/mic asides are pre-killed.
This is the workflow: you confirm my picks by ear. When it feels right, tap Export picks at the bottom and send me the code — I cut exactly those, word-trimmed, and master it. If this feels good, I build the same for all 9 sections.
Group 0 · 1 take(s)
Alright, hey
T001 · 00:37–00:38 · 0.6s
Group 1 · 2 take(s)
Hey, this is Paris
T002 · 00:39–00:40 · 0.8s
Take two. Hey. Hey, this is Paris put the time with me and I want to takekeeper
T003 · 00:43–00:49 · 5.5s
Group 2 · 1 take(s)
three three and take hey This is Paris. You booked a time with me. So thank you. I hit the mic. I got it back up a little bit I'm a little too close or just move the mic further. That should be good, right? right?setupkeeper
T004 · 00:51–01:02 · 10.9s
Group 3 · 1 take(s)
Let's get the audio up.setupkeeper
T005 · 01:03–01:05 · 1.2s
Group 4 · 1 take(s)
You shouldn't be able to hear any audio, actually, so it shouldn't matter.keeper
T006 · 01:06–01:09 · 2.6s
Group 5 · 1 take(s)
I'm going to test it again.setupkeeper"again"
T007 · 01:11–01:11 · 0.8s
Group 6 · 1 take(s)
Hey, this is Paris. Hey, this is Paris.keeper
T008 · 01:13–01:16 · 2.3s
Group 7 · 1 take(s)
You booked a time with me, and I appreciate that.keeper
T009 · 01:17–01:19 · 1.7s
Group 8 · 1 take(s)
Hey, this is Paris. Booked your slot, and I'm glad.keeper
T010 · 01:23–01:25 · 2.5s
Group 9 · 1 take(s)
Hey, it's Paris. Booked a slot with me, and I'm glad. We'll get to talk soon.keeper
T011 · 01:34–01:38 · 3.7s
Group 10 · 1 take(s)
Okay, again. Hey, this is Paris.keeper"again"
T012 · 01:40–01:42 · 2.0s
Group 11 · 4 take(s)
Hey, it's Paris. Hey, it's Paris. Book the slot with me and I'm glad. Looking forward to talking soon.
T013 · 01:44–01:49 · 5.6s
Hey, hey, hey, hey, it's Paris. Book the slot with me and I'm glad. Let's talk soon.
T014 · 01:51–01:59 · 7.9s
Hey, it's Paris. Hey, hey, it's Paris. Book the slot with me and I'm glad. We're gonna get to talk soon. Okay, now that's it."that's it"
T015 · 02:03–02:11 · 8.8s
Hey, hey, it's Paris. Book the call with me and I'm glad we're going to get the talks in.keeper
T016 · 02:13–02:19 · 5.5s
Group 12 · 1 take(s)
Before wekeeper
T017 · 02:24–02:25 · 0.6s
Group 13 · 4 take(s)
talk, I made this so our call goes smoothly. Before
T018 · 02:27–02:30 · 3.7s
we talk, I made this so our call goes.
T019 · 02:35–02:37 · 1.8s
Before we talk, I made this so our call is useful from the beginning. So we talk from.
T020 · 02:40–02:44 · 4.6s
Before we talk, I made this so our call is useful from the minute we start talking instead of me explaining what I do for 20.keeper
T021 · 02:48–02:54 · 5.9s
Group 14 · 2 take(s)
I'm going to explain to you. I'm
T022 · 03:02–03:04 · 1.8s
going to walk you through exactly what I do, whatkeeper
T023 · 03:09–03:11 · 2.4s
Group 15 · 1 take(s)
I build, how it works, what it costs.keeper
T024 · 03:12–03:13 · 1.3s
Group 16 · 2 take(s)
I'm going to walk you you through exactly what I do how much it costs what
T025 · 03:16–03:20 · 4.1s
I build how it works what it costs I'mkeeper
T026 · 03:21–03:24 · 3.5s
Group 17 · 1 take(s)
walking I'mkeeper
T027 · 03:28–03:29 · 0.8s
Group 18 · 2 take(s)
gonna walk you through exactly what I build how it works what happens next I'm
T028 · 03:34–03:38 · 3.7s
gonna walk you through exactly what I buildkeeper
T029 · 03:42–03:44 · 1.8s
Group 19 · 2 take(s)
how it works what it costs I'm gonna exactly I'm
T030 · 03:46–03:50 · 4.2s
gonna walk you through exactly what I build how it works what it costs and what happens next so that I'mkeeper
T031 · 03:52–03:58 · 6.2s
Group 20 · 1 take(s)
gonna walk you through what I build how it works how much it costs what happens next so you know know exactly what's going to happen during our call comingkeeper
T032 · 04:08–04:15 · 6.7s
Group 21 · 1 take(s)
with everything I'mkeeper
T033 · 04:17–04:18 · 1.3s
Group 22 · 1 take(s)
going to walk you through exactly what I build how it works what it costs and what happens next so you come with everything you need nextkeeper
T034 · 04:21–04:28 · 6.9s
Group 23 · 1 take(s)
ifkeeper
T035 · 04:32–04:33 · 1.0s
Group 24 · 3 take(s)
you're a service if
T036 · 04:39–04:40 · 1.4s
you run a service business if
T037 · 04:44–04:46 · 1.9s
you run a service business and you're the one answering the phones chasing the leads and doing the work this is for you too if you run a service business and you're the one answering the phones chasing the leads and doing the work this is for you letkeeper
T038 · 04:48–05:03 · 14.6s